Rendezvous~!
EXORCIST
Crazy Randomness Master! Fear it, love it, become it!
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Post by Rendezvous~! on Jul 4, 2010 15:20:06 GMT -5
NAME:Nobuyuki
TYPE: Crystal
DESCRIPTION:Nobuyuki has its equiment counterpart in the form of black army boots.Its main purpose is to eliminate offending akuma, however there is only so much Nobuyuki is capable of doing. It is capable of amplifying its user's accuracy, agility and physical abilties. The strength of the user's kicks and punches also doubles, but it is rather complicated innocence, meaning it is mostly face-to-face combat in most situations. And if the user is not completely in sync with his innocence, and lacks experience, it could provide difficult to take down a larger, more intelligent akuma. |
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Post by ZO DEAREST on Jul 4, 2010 15:58:19 GMT -5
This innocence looks very neat, however there is just one thing!
In the description could you please explain the looks of the innocence? Such as what item does the innocence appear in the form of whether it be gloves, ect. Thanks!
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Rendezvous~!
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Crazy Randomness Master! Fear it, love it, become it!
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Post by Rendezvous~! on Jul 4, 2010 16:18:05 GMT -5
I hoped I fixed it. The form of the innocence is located in the first sentence after description.
Does that fix my small mistake?
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Post by ZO DEAREST on Jul 4, 2010 16:24:59 GMT -5
Yep, thanks. xD This is now Approved
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